Hi!
Please read this article on how to write good copy leads. Leads are the first sentence in a copy story and should be used to get your reader's attention.
After reading the article, please post three lead sentences as a comment on this blog that relate to photos you have taken so far this year or an event you have attended. Identify the type of lead you have written according to the examples given in the article.
Most of you know how to post a comment - please ask one another for help if needed.
Due for a grade at the end of class.
Happy leading :)
-Mrs. R
1)when i walked into the room when the second grade was making little cinnamon pine cone christmas trees as a gift for there parents, it smelled just like a yankee candle the cinnamon stick one. The candle smell filled the room.
ReplyDelete2)I took pictures of 1st and second grade at recess i cold only remember how old i was when i was playing on that same playground.And the memories came whenever i looked at the swing set it instantly reminded me of when i was in elementary school. it was a good memory.
3)on the first day of school everyone was dressed nice, with brand new skirts with pretty colors such as blues,purples and greens!
Gigii
ReplyDelete1) i captured a stunning picture of Marina and Alexia for red and white day. Marina had a bright red tutu and Alexia with the bright red face paint.
2)The flashy long red bends Katliyn wore on red and white day i couldnt help but capture her school pride.
3) Waiting for my 4th grade yty art class to come i pulled aside all the kids in red and white and got the cutest picture of the kids posing along side Mrs. Rowe.
KP.
Delete1.Homecoming parade. Laughter and fun captured of the seniors throwing food.
2. I was sitting in the bleachers during the spirit games. there was so much yelling and screaming, and a lot of people having fun. I took many pictures of the activities that happened!
Samantha Budine
ReplyDelete1. Girls modified soccer team takes another win. The sound of the crowed was supper happy and cheerful as the team jogged across the field.
2. have you ever wondered what it is like to have the whole high school in the gym for spirit games? Well let me tell you. Loud and fun, lots of screaming of the other classes cheering for other classes. People yelling at Taylor for saying something was very unfair. To finding out who won and who didn't. A very fun afternoon!
3. Talking to the 4th grade abut supporting the 10th grade for spirit week. They all had so many questions. How do we do this day? What do we have to do to win? Just so many questions that didn't always make since when what we were talking about. They just were very excited to help!
Katelyn
ReplyDelete1.Boys modified game versus Morris.The boys start the game by warming up before taking them on after awhile the first goal is made by Jesse chase then by others the final score was 6-1.
2.The homecoming parade it had the high school grades it first went 7th grade then 8th grade then there was the Batmoblie!!! then freshmen juniors and sophomores and then the seniors attacked each other with shaving cream.